I looked up two consumer-oriented websites something I was
interested in. I am interested in gymnastics, so I looked up two different sites
that promote this sport and why people should do it. Both articles promoted the
benefits of gymnastics, one by LiveStrong and another by 12MinuteAthlete.
Which one was more useful? What makes it better?
I find the article by LiveStrong was more useful than the
12MinuteAthlete. I think this because it states its points clearly and efficiently,
while the other is a narrative of a woman’s experience of gymnastics with a few
points included. The LiveStrong’s format was also much more professional, and
the points were in chronological order. It was very detailed and specific,
telling you exactly the benefits of the sport. A way the other article by 12MinuteAthlete
could be improved would be to shorten the narrative and to state her points in
a clearer way. Also she could improve the formatting by not including her video
in the middle of her story which was very distracting to the reader.
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